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I would love some feedback
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Kristy Jackson Offline
The Joan Of Charisma


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#1
02-15-2014, 03:15 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=10479

Tell me what you guys think of Valentine's Day Aftermath Part 1. Smile

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THE FUCKED UP RESULT OF A COLLISION BETWEEN FIRE AND ICE, STEP COUSIN TO A WARM PUDDLE...
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Ann Thraxx Offline
Fuck the fuck off!


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#2
02-15-2014, 03:28 PM

Gilmour's gonna kill me for purposely not reading his stuff and giving feedback, but doing it for you.

That was a solid RP. It was descriptive and didn't leave anything out, so it made sense. I count it as being a bit of a long read because I'm an idiot with a short attention span, but it was a decent length, really. 1293. I think I did a Kimmy RP or two that was double that, so I can't call it long, can I? Back to quality... The concept was simple and to me is a real toss-up of "simple and creative" and "why make a promo about this?"... Mostly the former, though. I'm just known for my negativity.

All in all, good RP. I enjoyed it.
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Kristy Jackson Offline
The Joan Of Charisma


XWF FanBase:
Kids, women, some teens
(fighting the odds; helps others; disliked by adult males)
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Joined: Tue Jan 28 2014
Posts: 111
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#3
02-15-2014, 03:31 PM

Thanks lol Smile

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