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I would love some feedback - Kristy Jackson - 02-15-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=10479
Tell me what you guys think of Valentine's Day Aftermath Part 1.
I would love some feedback - Ann Thraxx - 02-15-2014
Gilmour's gonna kill me for purposely not reading his stuff and giving feedback, but doing it for you.
That was a solid RP. It was descriptive and didn't leave anything out, so it made sense. I count it as being a bit of a long read because I'm an idiot with a short attention span, but it was a decent length, really. 1293. I think I did a Kimmy RP or two that was double that, so I can't call it long, can I? Back to quality... The concept was simple and to me is a real toss-up of "simple and creative" and "why make a promo about this?"... Mostly the former, though. I'm just known for my negativity.
All in all, good RP. I enjoyed it.
I would love some feedback - Kristy Jackson - 02-15-2014
Thanks lol