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Because Archie Did This a While Back
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Jessie-ica Diaz Offline
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#1
10-23-2013, 08:30 PM

Basically, this is me opening myself up to give feedback on anyone who wants my opinion on a piece they wrote. How much more do I need to explain about that, really? Basically, how I'll do it is you either PM me or link in this thread the RP you want me to look at, and I'll PM you (note, always PM) back my thoughts.

Warning: Just like Archie's, I'm going to be a tad more brutally honest than most. That's part of the reason for why I'll be PMing my thoughts.

I'm doing this, because I like helping people out, like how I was helped out when I first got here, and because people do really enjoy my work (something that still sort of shocks me) and I figure my opinion might be a good one to get, I guess.

Wow, that kind of sounds egotistical, but that's not what I intend!

So yeah, if you want feedback, just hit me up in either way I previously mentioned, guys.

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#2
10-23-2013, 08:46 PM

Alright, I'll bite. What do you think?

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=7570
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#3
10-23-2013, 08:49 PM

I figure you'll give feedback, hence the thread. No rush, though. Just wanting to get your thoughts on this RP I just got up. Not my best and I'm worried it's a bit repetitive of previous work. I don't mind brutal honesty.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=7720

Thanks in advance.
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#4
10-23-2013, 09:44 PM

thoughts on my rp's lately?
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#5
10-24-2013, 12:34 AM

Jessie and Archie's school of cruel feedback? Haha
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Jessie-ica Diaz Offline
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#6
10-24-2013, 03:39 AM

Woah, shit! This kinda blew up quick!

I'll start to get back to everyone who's asked once I get out of school (which, since it's a half day, won't be too long.)
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#7
10-26-2013, 01:33 PM

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