Heironeous
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Super Face
(always cheered; has massive following; almost never cheats)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Wed May 15 2013
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05-18-2013, 02:43 PM
Hi guys I'm fairly new here and I would like to know you guys think about my first and following rps. Please understand that the first rp was more for you guys to understand what sort of guy he is going to be.
Successfully held a Wildcard Briefcase to Wildcard Weekend.
W3 / L2 Streak - 3W
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids
Steve Davids
XWF FanBase:
Teens, some men, few kids
(booed by casual fans; hurts people; often angry)
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Joined: Wed Mar 13 2013
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05-18-2013, 02:58 PM
(05-18-2013, 02:43 PM)Heironeous Said: Hi guys I'm fairly new here and I would like to know you guys think about my first and following rps. Please understand that the first rp was more for you guys to understand what sort of guy he is going to be.
Good start... Proof read your work though, there's a few errors that make it obvious you did not read your work back. Furthermore, just remember to be as detailed as you can in the description of your characters actions, looks, attire, surrounding etc and you will continue to improve.
Look forward to seeing more from you.
3x Xtreme Champion
1x Briefcase Holder
1x Television Champion
1x Universal Champion
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