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Judgement on a Wrestling Paladin. - Heironeous - 05-18-2013
Hi guys I'm fairly new here and I would like to know you guys think about my first and following rps. Please understand that the first rp was more for you guys to understand what sort of guy he is going to be.
RE: Judgement on a Wrestling Paladin. - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-18-2013
(05-18-2013, 02:43 PM)Heironeous Said: Hi guys I'm fairly new here and I would like to know you guys think about my first and following rps. Please understand that the first rp was more for you guys to understand what sort of guy he is going to be.
Good start... Proof read your work though, there's a few errors that make it obvious you did not read your work back. Furthermore, just remember to be as detailed as you can in the description of your characters actions, looks, attire, surrounding etc and you will continue to improve.
Look forward to seeing more from you.