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Feedback or the noob
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Flynn Andrew Cole-Ericson Offline
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#1
04-09-2015, 03:29 AM

Here it is:

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19429


Hello everyone.

Was wondering if you all could give me some feedback from my first promo.

Something I did in it that I've never done before was italicize internal monologue while leaving the text color the same as any part where I am describing my actions.

I am hoping that doing it that way was not too confusing for anyone as I really wanted to make sure that I reserved any type of colored text for dialogue only.

I hope everyone who had a chance to read the roleplay liked it, and if you didn't please tell me that too.

I want to hear it all.

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#2
04-09-2015, 03:36 AM

That Bruce guy seems dope, more of him in the next one lol!

Nah it was good read, I enjoyed it.
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