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Feedback or the noob - Flynn Andrew Cole-Ericson - 04-09-2015
Here it is:
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19429
Hello everyone.
Was wondering if you all could give me some feedback from my first promo.
Something I did in it that I've never done before was italicize internal monologue while leaving the text color the same as any part where I am describing my actions.
I am hoping that doing it that way was not too confusing for anyone as I really wanted to make sure that I reserved any type of colored text for dialogue only.
I hope everyone who had a chance to read the roleplay liked it, and if you didn't please tell me that too.
I want to hear it all.
The good, the bad and the fugly.
Peace
Feedback or the noob - Brucette Blingsteen - 04-09-2015
That Bruce guy seems dope, more of him in the next one lol!
Nah it was good read, I enjoyed it.