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#1
03-06-2013, 03:57 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1251&pid=4150#pid4150
This one is much more story involved and really gives you insight into Agony's character, it ends on a cliffhanger to build suspense and I will elaborate in part II later this week.
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03-06-2013, 05:11 PM

I just read it and the story looks pretty good like it can be a good way to plot the formation of "agony" assuming Kyle is agony's real name
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03-06-2013, 05:19 PM

Yeah I should probably clarify that, Kyle is Agony before he went crazy. This story is meant to show why Agony is who he is, it's Agony's origin story.
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03-06-2013, 05:26 PM

Nice im doing the same kind of thing with Cobra just a heads up your still going to want to include trash talk how ever possible because it is something the judges look for.
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03-06-2013, 05:34 PM

You don't necessarily have to have trash talk in every RP, but it would be wise to include it at some point during your RPs for each show.
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#6
03-07-2013, 08:09 PM

Part II is up, I included a little trash talk at the end but not much, this week was more about establishing my character.

Part II: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1274
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