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I think I've got it. Feedback? - Agony - 03-06-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1251&pid=4150#pid4150
This one is much more story involved and really gives you insight into Agony's character, it ends on a cliffhanger to build suspense and I will elaborate in part II later this week.
I think I've got it. Feedback? - Crimson Cobra - 03-06-2013
I just read it and the story looks pretty good like it can be a good way to plot the formation of "agony" assuming Kyle is agony's real name
I think I've got it. Feedback? - Agony - 03-06-2013
Yeah I should probably clarify that, Kyle is Agony before he went crazy. This story is meant to show why Agony is who he is, it's Agony's origin story.
I think I've got it. Feedback? - Crimson Cobra - 03-06-2013
Nice im doing the same kind of thing with Cobra just a heads up your still going to want to include trash talk how ever possible because it is something the judges look for.
I think I've got it. Feedback? - Paul Heyman - 03-06-2013
You don't necessarily have to have trash talk in every RP, but it would be wise to include it at some point during your RPs for each show.
I think I've got it. Feedback? - Agony - 03-07-2013
Part II is up, I included a little trash talk at the end but not much, this week was more about establishing my character.
Part II: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1274