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Roleplay Opinions - "Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves - 04-15-2017
Okay, yeah... So for the last couple of months I've been working on improving my trash talk game, which when I returned was pretty lame lol. Over the course of the last week, I've been also trying to focus on developing the character more so that you can actually see what kind of a guy he is. With that said, how do you think I'm doing? Do you feel like you're actually getting a feel for Micheal? Keep in mind, from last week to this week with the turn on Dolly, I've transitioned Graves from a tweener to a full blown heel.
Also, about my trash talk. I feel like I have improved by leaps and bounds, but I'd love to hear other opinions. For easy reference I'll link the 3 RPs for Savage in here.
Jokers... Rp1
Only Women Bleed
hApApY TrAiLs To YoU
Roleplay Opinions - Cadryn Tiberius - 04-15-2017
While my opinion is less credible than others due to my still somewhat newness to the XWF, I will say this.
I feel like your TT and your character development has improved quite a lot compares to the demonic possession angle and so forth.
I feel like Graves has finally settled into himself, and because of that, your writing overall has taken a huge leap forward.
Just my little opinion, buddy. :]