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Feedback on last 2 RP's
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Bane Williams Offline
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#1
05-27-2013, 02:16 AM

Family Values

Flying to Vegas

2 different styles of RP, mostly I'm still trying to develop the character. More dialogue will come into the future but right now in still finding my feet with Bane.
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
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#2
05-27-2013, 02:50 AM

As you say, I think you just need to keep it up. Your character development will keep coming and allow you to write more detailed descriptions and dialogue...The work is evidently of a good quality and I look forward to what's to come...
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Jack Killborn Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


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#3
05-27-2013, 02:54 AM

It was good I liked it keep up the good work but can I pls get some feed back on my latest RP.

Thanks Jack.
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