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Feedback on last 2 RP's - Bane Williams - 05-27-2013
Family Values
Flying to Vegas
2 different styles of RP, mostly I'm still trying to develop the character. More dialogue will come into the future but right now in still finding my feet with Bane.
Feedback on last 2 RP's - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-27-2013
As you say, I think you just need to keep it up. Your character development will keep coming and allow you to write more detailed descriptions and dialogue...The work is evidently of a good quality and I look forward to what's to come...
Feedback on last 2 RP's - Jack Killborn - 05-27-2013
It was good I liked it keep up the good work but can I pls get some feed back on my latest RP.
Thanks Jack.