#MemeQueen Luca Torchwick
Waves don't die.
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11-04-2013, 05:02 PM
And because of this fact; the Kinwrathi account is deactivated and I can't post this thread with it.
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=7943
There's definitely rust here, but I feel as though I'm doing pretty well and combatting most of it.
Would love to hear others' thoughts on it though, especially seeing as though there are a lot of people who weren't here when I last wrote for this character. I'm sure it's a little confusing, but I hope this at least drew you in and made you want to understand more of what's going on and such.
Thanks in advance, as per the usual.
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John Raide
We can chase the dark together
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11-04-2013, 07:19 PM
I'll try to do a deeper dive on this later, but I wanted to share some initial feedback if that is okay. This is some very interesting stuff here and I'm definitely digging it. Great character interactions and I like the prose here as well. I'll give a better critique when I get a moment to go back through it.
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AlexandraCallaway
Demon or Angel? You decide!
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11-04-2013, 07:31 PM
I'm so glad Kinwrathi is back. He's fucking awesome.. this rp is fucking awesome.. just awesome.
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