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Feedback on this "Storyline" ?
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"The Phantom" Jack Kronus
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09-03-2013, 05:00 PM

Can I have some feed back on these two pieces? I usually write individual pieces, like, with any relation to each other. However, I'm kind of thinking about starting some kind of storyline. I want some honest feedback on these two. I really need to know what you guys think.

First one - http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6051

Second one - http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=6237




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