Cadryn Tiberius
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10-27-2017, 08:23 AM
(10-27-2017, 07:11 AM)Finn Kühn Said: Hey guys! I had a hectic RP schedule this time against Cadryn, who was a phenomenal opponent to go against. Despite the fact that I came up short, I still think I did well, and I'd just like to get a sense of feedback here, more specifically what I can do to improve my trash talk. Thanks in advance!
Part 1: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29608
Part 2: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=29625
My friend, the pleasure was all mine.
Knowing in advance your schedule, and so on, I can say with utmost confidence that your work did not suffer.
Your story telling skills are incredible, I loved it. You brought the heat, and I felt it. Had the decision went the other way, by no means would I have been surprised. You forced me to put forth a little more in some aspects than I had originally anticipated, to be honest.
If there was anything I could offer advice on, it would be rebuttals. Quite a few times you left yourself open, and I exploited those openings.
That's honestly the only thing I saw that could stand any type of improvement.
You're awesome, and I enjoyed the hell out of our back and forth.
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Taylor Mayde
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10-27-2017, 08:52 AM
"Mr. Kuhn,
I share the above sentiments that your storytelling is amazing. Trash Talk needs to come a little bit harder it felt like you were almost scrambling the counter all of the points Cadryn made and by the second one it seems like you almost backed into a corner in that department. If This Were storytelling contest you would have won in my opinion because like the gentleman above said it was phenomenal, I really felt like I was into the story and really felt like I was there and a part of it. Try to be a little bit more intense with your trash talk because it came off not only as if you were just trying to counter but a little soft in my opinion. Overall though you've been putting out good work that I have seen browsing through the boards and you can only go up from here. Best of luck to you and I look forward to reading future work."
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"The Wolf of Afghanistan" Joshua Schuler (10-29-2017), Cadryn Tiberius (10-27-2017), Finn Kühn (10-27-2017)
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