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X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
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Jason E Smith Offline
Welcome the Darkness


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Tweener/Neutral
(crowd reaction varies; dips between face & heel)
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#1
05-21-2013, 09:19 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2894&pid=9513#pid9513

Thoughts on latest RP ^^
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
Steve Davids


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Teens, some men, few kids
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#2
05-21-2013, 09:26 AM

I feel like we are learning more and more about your character which is good. I like the idea of it being on the radio, sort of.... As you know by now I love description and of course a radio broadcast does not allow that. I think you should have described the way in which your character was speaking more.... but good work!
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