http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2709

I'm very experienced but the promo writing style used in this type of e-fedding is different to the bebo one I was used to writing with so this is my try at a new style, I know it's not for a match but just to boost myself and keep improving?

Any feedback, good and bad would be very much appreciated?!

Thankyou!

When I was on skype, people were talking about how good they thought you were. One specifically said they thought you could really set a scene well.

I will say, in this fed, people have all different sorts of styles. I mean, I basically never write promo-style RP's. Sometimes people react to the RP's as if they were promos, but basically, I've almost never written an RP that was a promo. They are almost always simply stories about my characters.

Some guys write promo-style RP's, some guys even write RP's that don't set a scene at all and simply include trash-talk.

Agree with KnightMask.... Your style is good. The best part of XWF is the way that your RP is not a promo which almost all e-feds insist they are. You can bring your character's persona from his own home if you like.

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Thankyou for the feedback guys I will try and implement those key things into my next roleplays for the Pay-Per-View so if possible when I post them if you could PM me or write on here what you think it would be extremely helpful, obviously all of this is if time allows you to.

Thankyou both of you.

Vyper.