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#1
06-23-2014, 03:11 PM

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#2
06-23-2014, 04:38 PM

First, I'm not a big fan of the way you posed the question. To me it brings the notion that losing to Duke, Eli, Morbid, and Gup are feats to be ashamed of. Which is strongly incorrect. There is a reason Eli is 12-0 for singles, why Duke won the briefcase that got him the Uni title, and why Morbid is #1 contender for it. As for Gup, the man's work is awesome.

As for the feedback, the medical stuff was off, which isn't a big deal, but just an observation. Anti-inflamatory drugs, or rather NSAIDs, arr stuff like Aleve and Motrin. You wouldn't get any injection for a sprain. You'd follow RICE. Rest. Ice. Compression. Elevation. Why would he have a table full of steroids? As per the Anabolic Steroid Act of 1991 it's against federal law for pro athletes to juice. You'd need a prescription for it,which would 9/10 be grounds for retirement. These don't hurt you, just fun facts from a medical point of view.

As for stuff that does cause issues. Your spelling is pretty good, but you make a few typos. Mostly cause you're typing on your phone. Happens to me. Biggest piece of advice i can give, if possible use a computer. I'm a fan, and you did beat me for sotm for a reason.
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Cain Offline
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#3
06-23-2014, 04:57 PM

I didnt mean to make so many mistakes. I just felt like my recent work was rushed and felt rushed and that I failed myself as a writer. Sorry Frodo. You're right. Losing to those guys is nothing to be ashamed of.
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#4
06-23-2014, 05:05 PM

Man, no need to apologise. We cool, I just didn't want you to turn like another person who we won't name, but took losing too harshly and left. You're too good for that. You're really fantastic, and you do deserve the admiration you get.
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#5
06-23-2014, 05:10 PM

Heh. I ain't leaving. But Cain is gonna be getting more evil.
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#6
06-23-2014, 07:48 PM

I love EVIL!
болезненное ангел!
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