In an attempt to really get into my character I tried a first person perspective. It's in the Wednesday Warfare board. Just wondering if i did better with that than I do with Third Person.

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I gave you feedback before and I’ll do it again.


I read your Wednesday work and I noticed that you dropped the accent. I really enjoyed the accent but I understand why you did it… it was probably hard to keep it going through the few multiple role-plays. At the same time it added to your dedication to the role.
But it is still good. A little slow to start and had humor and blatant racism against the Hispanic people…always funny lol

If I can offer some advice. If you were suppose to be German at one point…perhaps bringing in the accent now and again. Like an anger accent. That way if he can have the best of both worlds with and without but still keeping it entertaining. Like when Morbid Angel gets mad he just says his own name a lot and every other word is “Fuck”. gotta have a trademark for your guy. Frodo is going to do some kind of drug or fuck something in every role-play, Duke is going to have a lot of conversations, Alexandra Calloway will kiss someone, Nazi will say something racist and Peter Gilmour will talk about people orally fellating him. With that being said, you can be the man who has the “Angerccent” if you will.