Rebel
Jackass of all Trades
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09-19-2013, 05:37 PM
1x X-Treme Champion (13 days)
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John Austin
Grizzled Young Vet
WWW
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09-19-2013, 05:52 PM
Prolly your best work yet...my only gripe and it's a small one....just space out some of your words next time, I know for me it's easier on the eyes to read but other than that...keep up the awesome work
To find John, turn those lights out because he will then appear...
XWF LEGEND and the only man who punked out Duke TWICE
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Rebel (09-19-2013)
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Rebel
Jackass of all Trades
XWF FanBase:
Heel w/ Cult Following
(the heel you love to love; does whatever they want)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Fri Jul 19 2013
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09-19-2013, 06:04 PM
Thank you man. I originally did have it spaced more, but it seemed like it was taking up more space than needed. but I'll remember that for next time
1x X-Treme Champion (13 days)
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Peter Fn Gilmour
the man with the SUPER DICK
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09-20-2013, 09:33 AM
yeah space out your paragraphs dude. but it wasnt that bad.. and its GILMOUR! not gilmore.. ppl need to remember that..
got my work cut out for me but i intend to make this match EPIC!
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SUCK... MY... DICK!
3X Star of the Month
Former 3x Hart Champion
Former 13X Xtreme Champion
Former 6X Tag Champion
Former 2X Trios Champion
Former 2x Heavy Metal Weight Champion
Former Universal Champion
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Jessie-ica Diaz
Only to find it again.
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09-20-2013, 02:21 PM
As cliche as it sounds, the book is the Art Of War by Sun Tzu. - Love this line.
All in all, really liked this piece, man. Using the Art of War stuff is one of those kinda cliched things, but it really fit for the character, and that's all that matters. My biggest gripe (along with misspelling names, it is Gilmour) is that there are a few errors in spelling, but those were just typos that can be fixed. Also, I think the sports references seemed a little bit out of place, for the character. Then again, I don't quite know all about the Rebel character yet. Keep it up.
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