I'm really liking the persona of your character. You nailed the promo style in my opinion. Knowing it is the first of hopefully more soon, I don't really want to critique the little amount you mentioned your opponent. I suck at criticism! Constructive or not. Like Lane said you have a unique layout. Really liked the video of the sounds of your scene. Really helped with pulling me there. I have a feeling you are going to shine. Keep at it.