(05-20-2013, 01:45 PM)Sebastian Duke Said: First e-fed? They're excellent in that case. Let me add to my buddy KM up there. This is something someone told me when I first came in (Looking at you, Soldier.): Read others roleplays. Start with the "top guys." Look at what they do. Read as much as you can.

You're not even really off the mark. For a first time, they're very very good.

Develop a story centered around Braxton outside of the ring. How he interacts with others. How you reacts to others. Does he have friends? Is he a loner? What makes Brian Braxton tick?

You're already off to a solid start. Keep your eyes peeled and your ears open and you'll go far.

Agree with this, there's no better way of improving your RPs than reading other people's work. It will help creatively A LOT!

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