I pretty much agree with what Steve said.

My personal opinions:
-Good Descriptions like "A women in a tight black dress with massive cleavage" xD haha
-Love the pre-story before the promo, had a good personal friend who use to do that when he RPed, and I was always amazed on how he could do that and still make it like a basic standard promo

-Also on that note, love how you somewhat mentioned the story in the actual promo for the match. "Well, shit. I didn't realize there were cameras there that night. Guinness makes me violent and yet slightly romantic. It's a wonderful thing, the Irish. I hear they had lovely potatoes as well"

Cons:
-Basically what Steve said, just work on the small things and you are set.



Can't wait to see more work from ya