Yeah I can see that. Less is more to a reader, not everyone enjoys the same things. Normally when I write I always feel that I could add more and sometimes get carried away which is why my RP is actually a large length. I tend to type up things such as "He laughed" or "He smirks" to add a sort of simplicity that counteracts the dialogue I write. I'm not saying I fully like it because there are times I write it out and think, "Maybe I should add more to that." It really depends on my mood, but I like to shoot for more.

In other words I'd like to see what I could do with the adding some more description. If I it works and I like it then sure I'll keep it. If not then I can always return to what I know. Oddly enough with Scott it has become less descriptive and more about what he says as opposed to his former alter-ego The Wraith who tended to be a combination. I think with me it flows with my character. Wraith has more class than Scott and it shows in the both. What I'm getting at here is...well that i enjoy writing and when I get on a kick it's hard to stop. Some things have to be sacrificed.

So what I'm really saying here is that shouldn't be my case. I should bring all attributes into my story telling instead of certain parts suffering. As you can see I do get carried away because this is a long response. On another note this is a wonderful discussion that could be had. I'm also all ears for any improvement.

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