(05-18-2013, 03:55 PM)Scott Charlotte Said: Thanks, honestly I have to agree with you. I write those in, but i've never truly like them. Was never sure how anyone else felt now that I know it will be changed. I'm trying to get a feel for this updated Scott and it makes me want to switch to First Person mode with things, something I haven't done in a long time. I've been predominately third person. But thanks for the advice I will make sure to increase the descriptiveness.

Bare in mind mate some people might prefer your brief descriptions....

I am a little obsessive of setting a scene and having a image painted for me. Although if you have read my work you will know I try to do that, not always succeeding I might add.

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