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Do I Deserve To Be Here
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John Msdison 2.Faggot
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04-14-2015, 08:56 AM

Your grammar is way off for one. That might be the best place to start. For instance:

Quote:Thunderbolt X turns off the camera And walks.away

What is that? Why is the A capitalized and why is there a period thrown in the middle of the sentence?

We don't grade harshly on grammar but come on.
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Messages In This Thread
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Muddy Waters - 04-14-2015, 03:48 AM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Vincent Lane - 04-14-2015, 09:17 AM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Mr. Oz - 04-14-2015, 09:27 AM
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Paul Heyman - 04-14-2015, 08:50 AM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by John Msdison 2.Faggot - 04-14-2015, 08:56 AM
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by John_Black - 04-14-2015, 02:27 PM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Mastermind - 04-14-2015, 04:47 PM



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