I thought they were both funny and that can really work in your favor. So far I've enjoyed reading your work but there is a little thing I would look out for and that is when your opponent ends up putting things off camera, flash backs, ect. I know I use a lot of off camera work to explain who Mandii is and what she does when the cameras aren't on. When I write roleplays for Mandii I kind of think of each of them as episodes in season if you understand that lol. This makes writing interesting for not only me but whoever is reading. I also use flash backs as another way to kind of also tell more about Mandii. I noticed you using some of your opponents off camera or flash back in a promo for Carson to make fun of her (And while I thought the way you did it was perfect) you also have to understand the difference between something said off camera, in a flash back, or even in someones head. As for your first RP I thought it was really good and funny and I really enjoy the Miss Fortune and Carson back and forth.