Best role play of the week as far as I'm concerned. My view is that content is more important than structure. What John means is that there is a line break missing between dialogue and narrative in a few points but that doesn't (in my few) take away from how well written it was. Not saying that John was suggesting this is a huge problem but his feedback in terms of stricture is correct; just watch your formatting tags.

Interesting scene, good dialogue and furthered the match story. From your opponent I was happy enough.