(10-16-2014, 12:15 PM)Fordo Swagkins Said: Scorpio is still here, somewhat. He comes and goes.

Scorpio = Kid Money to the original gangstaz of XWF.

Stone, from what I remember about your work you'd do very well here if you adjusted only a few things. Basically cut down the RP length but still maintain a good amount of relevance to the fed and your opponent(s) throughout the week and you'd be fine. We're not big fans of huge RPs anymore because we'd rather see more individual back and forth pieces between foes through the week and feel like it's a real battle. A 6k or 8k RP should easily be able to be broken up into smaller parts and posted separately to make sure people aren't having to skim through parts or ignore parts. As the fed ages, so do the majority of handlers we attract even if they're new, and older people don't have as much time as we all had when we were young spring chickens and could sit around busting out 6k, 10k, etc RPs and everybody actually had the time to read them all. Storytelling also still does very well here as long as you're not ignoring an opponent the entire week in favor of a story, which some people had a slight issue with until I started stressing how important relevance is.