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feedback of my 1st promo
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Sincere Lee Wild Offline
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04-08-2013, 09:00 AM

Just read this one as well, I will admit it was very entertaining, I loved the banter between the narrator I thought it was very creative.

All roleplays need improvement because as writers we should all strive to do better each and every time we post a RP. Like I have said to everyone in the past make sure your spellcheck your RP's and just proof read them for things missing.

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Messages In This Thread
feedback of my 1st promo - by Gamegenie - 04-07-2013, 01:13 PM
feedback of my 1st promo - by Sincere Lee Wild - 04-08-2013, 09:00 AM
feedback of my 1st promo - by Gamegenie - 04-08-2013, 01:19 PM
feedback of my 1st promo - by C Y R E N - 04-08-2013, 01:28 PM
feedback of my 1st promo - by Gamegenie - 04-09-2013, 10:44 AM



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