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Feedback on my Work As of Late
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
Steve Davids



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#2
08-05-2014, 09:46 AM

Hey man, I really enjoyed your story and I do think our match will be extremely close this week.

The one thing I will say is adding more XWF relevance to your work is something that needs to be done because it is something that we (management) will look at when judging matches. You do include some but maybe not enough sometimes if you get me?

I genuinely think you could win the match just based on how good your story is though.

Also, if you can, try to respond to a trash talk piece because otherwise it allows your opponent to have the final word to say and therefore get one up on you - which is something else we look at when judging.

Best of luck

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Messages In This Thread
Feedback on my Work As of Late - by Cain - 08-05-2014, 09:26 AM
Feedback on my Work As of Late - by Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 08-05-2014, 09:46 AM
Feedback on my Work As of Late - by Vincent Lane - 08-05-2014, 09:53 AM
RE: Feedback on my Work As of Late - by Cain - 08-05-2014, 11:56 AM



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