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My Immortal (Feedback Please)
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Kruzifix Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


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(booed by casual fans; opportunistic; often plays dirty while setting the trends)
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06-27-2014, 12:57 PM

I agree on the tense, that's always been one of my focal points, but I'm actually here to give you feedback on the piece you posted moments ago...It was pitch perfect, on point. That ending delievered wonderfully, and I was LITERALLY upset cuz I wanted tah know what happened next >< ....That's the mark of a great storyteller. Fantastic work, Arch. ^^
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Messages In This Thread
My Immortal (Feedback Please) - by Archie Lawson - 06-26-2014, 03:12 AM
My Immortal (Feedback Please) - by Archie Lawson - 06-26-2014, 03:25 AM
My Immortal (Feedback Please) - by Kruzifix - 06-27-2014, 12:57 PM
My Immortal (Feedback Please) - by Kruzifix - 06-27-2014, 01:13 PM
My Immortal (Feedback Please) - by Kruzifix - 06-29-2014, 11:56 PM



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