Only thing that made me a little uncomfortable was the "OOC" bit you did. Almost felt like a work around for an ooc message you were trying to relay. Its nothing that I would ding against you though since you were creative and didn't break character. I just wouldnt get into a habit of doing it.

The footage bit with Dims matches and the trash talk to Radio and Nova were hilarious.

if you have any tips for dim let me know