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Constructive Criticism?
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Crimson Deadly Away
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03-01-2013, 04:28 AM

Say what you must about any of my work, if it gets across to me then I have no problem with you completely talking down my work like it's a pile of crap (just so long as you give me a reason why and how I can improve, obviously), I like straight forward and honest people so that's what I want you to be here...

So, I'm quite sure by this point given my record that I'm a pretty decent rper and have what it takes to be a possible future main eventer in XWF, though I could just be speaking conceitedly, who knows until I get replies on this.

Anyways, reason why I'm asking is, well... In order to be one of the greats I need to be able to beat the greats, yet so far I had trouble beating Sebastian Duke with 3 rps compared to his 2, I know that it's about quality and not quantity but given the standard of my rps (which aren't horrible by anybody's standards I'm sure), I thought maybe the higher number including consistency in my writing would be enough to pull it off, but, obviously it didn't. I want to improve that quality through here so that when maybe I do write 3 rps compared to someone else's 2, or 2 compared to 1 (you get the idea), then it's a sure fire victory for me.

Anyways yeah, like I said, don't hold back on your responses, if you think it sucks, say it sucks, tell me why, and then give me a few examples as to how I can improve or explain it to me... I want a golden future, and not just the WTF UFO belt Tongue

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Constructive Criticism? - by Crimson Deadly - 03-01-2013, 04:28 AM
Constructive Criticism? - by KnightMask - 03-09-2013, 09:43 PM



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