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02-27-2013, 11:39 AM

I'm a rook here as well, but have been e-fedding off and on for a few years now. Since you asked for honesty, I'm happy to try and help. I think your trash talk is good. It gets across the character well. However, I do think you'll benefit not only from descriptions of what your character is doing, but also from possibly setting the scene. Where are we? Are we floating in space? (If so, tell us that lol). In my time with e-fedding I feel that you always learn best from the guys at the top and that dictates style and pace for what is successful. Not saying there's a formula, but the guys who win are taking risks and trying new things. Just my thoughts. Hope this helped, dude!
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Messages In This Thread
Be honest - by Agony - 02-27-2013, 10:38 AM
Be honest - by Crimson Deadly - 02-27-2013, 10:49 AM
Be honest - by KnightMask - 02-27-2013, 11:24 AM
Be honest - by Sweet Cheapshots - 02-27-2013, 11:39 AM
Be honest - by Agony - 02-27-2013, 02:31 PM
Be honest - by Sebastian Duke - 02-27-2013, 09:57 PM



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