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First Kinwrathi RP in Over Four Months
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11-04-2013, 07:19 PM

I'll try to do a deeper dive on this later, but I wanted to share some initial feedback if that is okay. This is some very interesting stuff here and I'm definitely digging it. Great character interactions and I like the prose here as well. I'll give a better critique when I get a moment to go back through it.
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First Kinwrathi RP in Over Four Months - by John Raide - 11-04-2013, 07:19 PM



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