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10-01-2013, 02:54 PM

Well for one, I would try and stick with a couple colors and leave it at that and only use bold for like say if you are screaming

IE: LJ: When I face John Austin on Sunday, he will know the meaning of PAIN AND DESTRUCTION

Like me, I use white for the normal scenes when I am describing something and when I start talking I use my norm of blue or here recently...red.

When I bring some-one else in, I usually try to find a color that is not to over-the top and is readable.

Overall I like you stuff and hate the only time we faced off, I couldn't RP more than I did but oh well Smile .... you are doing great here...it just takes time to find a niche and take off with it

Smoke said it best. Tell a story. Get everyone to know who is LJ really. Like with me, I recently started talking about the demons I have been dealing with and it seems to have taken off for me.

Like I said, choose easier colors on the eyes, less bold only when necessary and try and give us more info about what makes LJ tick. Does he face demons too, is he a former mafia hit-man? what?

Keep up the great work Smile

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Messages In This Thread
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 02:36 PM
Advice? - by Rebel - 10-01-2013, 02:42 PM
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 02:44 PM
Advice? - by Rebel - 10-01-2013, 02:46 PM
Advice? - by Smoke - 10-01-2013, 02:48 PM
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 02:49 PM
Advice? - by John Austin - 10-01-2013, 02:54 PM
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 02:56 PM
RE: Advice? - by John Austin - 10-01-2013, 03:09 PM
Advice? - by Great Buzzard Eli James IV - 10-01-2013, 03:31 PM
Advice? - by Peter Fn Gilmour - 10-01-2013, 03:49 PM
Advice? - by Jessie-ica Diaz - 10-01-2013, 03:51 PM
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 04:51 PM
Advice? - by LJ Havok - 10-01-2013, 05:02 PM
Advice? - by John Msdison 2.Faggot - 10-01-2013, 06:15 PM
Advice? - by Hunter Payne - 10-01-2013, 08:48 PM
Advice? - by Sincere Lee Wild - 10-02-2013, 06:15 AM



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