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Rebel v. Gilmore
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Jessie-ica Diaz Offline
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09-20-2013, 02:21 PM

As cliche as it sounds, the book is the Art Of War by Sun Tzu. - Love this line.

All in all, really liked this piece, man. Using the Art of War stuff is one of those kinda cliched things, but it really fit for the character, and that's all that matters. My biggest gripe (along with misspelling names, it is Gilmour) is that there are a few errors in spelling, but those were just typos that can be fixed. Also, I think the sports references seemed a little bit out of place, for the character. Then again, I don't quite know all about the Rebel character yet. Keep it up.
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Messages In This Thread
Rebel v. Gilmore - by Rebel - 09-19-2013, 05:37 PM
Rebel v. Gilmore - by John Austin - 09-19-2013, 05:52 PM
Rebel v. Gilmore - by Rebel - 09-19-2013, 06:04 PM
Rebel v. Gilmore - by Peter Fn Gilmour - 09-20-2013, 09:33 AM
Rebel v. Gilmore - by Jessie-ica Diaz - 09-20-2013, 02:21 PM



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