... the ONLY "feedback" I've been given is to cut my writing short. I've been told that for years... yet I've also been told that people enjoy it.

The Prologue is meant for an actual book. It's not going to be cut short.

And as far as roleplays are concerned... if Admin tells me to cut them down? I will. But the rules state we don't have to force ourselves to do so.

So I'm not.

If anyone will actually read what I wrote and give me some different feedback other than what I've been told eleventy bajillion times over the years?

I'll gladly accept it.

But I'm not going to "learn" from cutting my pieces down. I've been writing since before I was 13. I'm now 26. That's one thing I will not change.

But I would love it if someone actually read my Prologue and let me know what they thought.