I like reading critiques of others cuz it shows me where I could use some improvement myself. Descriptiveness is my downfall. But I will learn. The rp I put up tomoro, I'm gonna ask for feedback.

Now on to your rp, Rebel, I really liked it. You're character is developing rapidly. I like the fact that you sprinkled some dickish humor in there. And I don't take the shot you took at me personally either. I loved it, gives me more fuel and that is what I wanted people to say/think. You're really on top of your game. I really wanna work with you sometime in the future. cheers.