Thank you! I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read through my work and giving feedback. Yeah, I myself wasn't a fan of my trash talk portion either. I did rush through it without much in the way of rereading due to knowing that Aldway had opted to take time off and was probably going to no show. Coupling that with the time it takes to adjust from a certain type of character who does more in the sense of sarcastic, wise ass humor for trash talk to someone like Paradoxica.

All in all though, better get my ass in gear for the trash talk in my next RP though.

Again, thank you.