I don't think there is such a thing as a perfect post, just as I do not think there is such thing as a perfect film, novel or TV Series.

I think it depends on who is reading/judging it. As a reader I like to be painted a picture for me, where as Heyman/Duke prefers entertainment. I enjoy reading writing of the highest quality and for me it doesn't always need to be full of fast paced action, just a story that makes me BELIEVE in the character.

I hate using examples but i am going to anyway, Mr. Satellite's character is not human, and is therefore unrealistic. Despite this, reading his work makes me believe in the character.

Ultimately as Mr. Satellite said though, the most perfect role play is the role play that YOU the writer enjoys writing the most. If you enjoy writing it, the odds are we will enjoy reading it.