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Feedback wanted! Snow Job Feedback Request
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Prince Adeyemi Offline
The Heir Apparent



XWF FanBase:
Traditionalists

(has an old school wrestling mentality; no nonsense; less appealing to some younger fans)


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01-30-2023, 05:55 PM

I really enjoyed the read! Particular enjoyed that backyard brawl match, and I don't think I'm just biased cos I was in it. It was genuinely fun. Thought it established all three characters as violent, hungry athletes.

Ned Kaye and Chris Page stole the show I think, with their opening segment and the drama of the match going into overtime really sold it for me. Sold Ned as a solid face character and Page as a horrid heel.

Wasn't super sure about what to make of the Uni match personally - for a main event I'm sure if it concluded or extended an angle all that well. It felt like a gimmick match, which it was, but not sure if it built either character up beyond that.

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Snow Job Feedback Request - by Atticus Gold - 01-30-2023, 09:30 AM
RE: Snow Job Feedback Request - by Prince Adeyemi - 01-30-2023, 05:55 PM
RE: Snow Job Feedback Request - by Mark Flynn - 01-30-2023, 08:48 PM
RE: Snow Job Feedback Request - by Dolly Waters - 01-31-2023, 04:58 PM



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