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04-15-2019, 09:30 AM

I enjoyed your story. I found it well written and very novel-esque. My personal preferences are that I tend to have a bit of a distaste for "reply" style trash talk, where one person just fires back at whatever their opponent came at them with first rather than coming up with their own salvo to lead off with. I think of it like someone being dragged by a dog on a leash rather than being in control of the process. Outside of that, there was nothing really wrong with your writing here.
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Feedback request - by The Brothers Blackwater - 04-12-2019, 07:33 PM
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