If I could get some feedback on my stuff for Savage, primarily the third piece, that would be awesome. I wanted to add trash talk to the third rp, I planned to read Lux's third piece and do precisely that after I finished writing and coding the story but there was simply not enough room. By the counter I had enough space left to write something like... you smell bad Lux and your mom dresses you funny too (example, lol), so I only went with the story. Anyway I really wanted to get this story out and I'm just curious how it was received. Any thoughts or opinions, would be very much appreciated. Thanx in advance