I really liked it, and I honestly don't have any major criticisms. She comes across very authentic and I look forward to seeing her and Jessalyn as a team.

Writing face characters is tough. I still struggle with Joachim, trying to find that balance of assertive but not too much of a prick. I think you really nailed it here, perhaps even better than me. If you're looking for something fresh to renew your interest, I think you may have it.

I wish I had more constructive stuff to say, but I really don't. Do we have any IRL ladies here to chime in?