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06-30-2013, 04:40 AM

Read your last work for Wild Card and I loved it.

My only thing I would change is space some of your paragraphs out. There are a couple of the last RPs you did, it looks like one HUGE RP as just one paragraph. I would space some of it out so it doesn't look like you said all that stuff on one breath haha.

Other than that, keep it up man.
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