Vincent Lane
Rock n' Rolling XWF Owner and Megastar
        

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03-08-2018, 09:55 AM
I simply disagree with Erik here. I don't see at all where it's JUST ripping the promo. There's story throughout every RP I have seen of the guy's work, and it's well done. There is a LOT to be said with being able to get across character building and storyline with very little. It's actually impressive to be able to pull it off!
I get a good sense of who the Petalance character is just from his dialogue, and from the minimal scenery we get cued in on. It's very "show me, don't tell me" and that's good work.
Look at the latest one against BX3. It's hard to work against dumbass joke characters like them because they are so ridiculous, but he pulls it off.
You don't have to write long exposition to tell a story, there are ways like this to do it too.
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