(07-26-2017, 11:22 AM)Rosalina Said: The story in this R.p is that she came to the XWF with Mario but they had agreed to be independent of each other no love interest stuff here!

It tells the audience that unlike most women she is completely independent and depends on herself to get through life, that she can do good and bad by herself and not need a man in her life to give her direction and tells you who she is...Lady Rosalina:
Queen of the Stars, mother to a countless number of children and new ones constantly being born.

The idea is spreading a positive in somewhat way message that if you want to do something and make something of yourself in the world that you should depend on your own power to do it not anyone else's!

By story, I had meant what is your character doing? We get a brief overview of her going to Central Park and she expresses a goal for herself-- she wants to be fully independent and self-sufficient, which is fine, but we need more.

I'm with Lane on this one, a gritty reimagining of the Mario Universe would be great here. Maybe explore Rosalina wanting to be a mother to the Lumas? Go more into her backstory with her becoming the figure that she is (yes, I'm aware of Rosalina's books in SMG1, but there are people here who haven't played that game and you can still explore the events between the books and the events of the SMG games). Maybe explore more of her trying to be independent like how you brought up in your recent RP. There's a lot of potential with this character.