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Vincent Lane Offline
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07-14-2017, 06:00 PM

So, I finally got to sit down and read this.

I think it's excellent. It actually made me go back and check some of your previous stuff for comparison. You can definitely see some improvement here and some focus on character development. You used the IC plot points from your departure really well, and have a good grasp on imagery.

You've clearly put thought into how to make the character its own and not just another tough guy who will take on all comers. Depth comes with adversity, and you really got that here.

I think it's got a good look to it, too. Good layout feel, unique enough stylings that you can at a glance know "This is a McCoy promo." I was impressed with it and think others will be also.

Great return promo, and I know they will only get better from here.
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Messages In This Thread
Feedback request - by Travis McCoy - 07-12-2017, 10:13 AM
re:Feedback request - by Vincent Lane - 07-14-2017, 06:00 PM
Feedback request - by Travis McCoy - 07-14-2017, 06:22 PM
re:Feedback request - by Chris Chaos - 07-14-2017, 06:56 PM
re:Feedback request - by Chris Chaos - 07-14-2017, 06:59 PM
Feedback request - by Travis McCoy - 07-14-2017, 07:00 PM



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